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I could see the images so vivid in my head, but they were flickering constantly, like an old film, one image appearing and being rapidly replaced by another. The emotions that partnered the images were fleeting but overwhelming, happiness replaced by joy, followed by love and sorrow. Certain images I tried to desperately grab hold of and keep them in my head. As much as the images kept changing being pulled by edwards heartstrings I was certain, as certain as I had been of the time I first saw Jaspers beautiful face in my thoughts, I glanced across at him now curiosity and questioning etched across his face, his amber eyes lined with sheer admiration of myself, I felt my cheeks blush colourless as I traced a finger across his defined face, he smiled and returned the guesture. I screamed almost silently and jasper gently applied pressure to my shoulder, whispering so low not even emmet or Rosalie would hear, asking was I okay, I simply nodded for once wanting to concentrate on something much more than my Jasper. I saw edward, and I saw the devastation, teenagers, teacher dead, edward manic, the girl cornered, fear swarming her as she tried to remain calm as she starred into the black eyes of her killer, I lurched up my brother and sister immediately following suit, emmet demanding to know what was wrong, suddenly a feeling of relaxation swallowed my entire being, I wasn't sure as to weather it was Jasper or the new certainty in my mind, I grinned, my family confused, Rosalie taking seat first eyebrow raised but silent, they were used to my gift, a waiting game I decided

 

In the background I could hear the humans muttering amongst themselves, unlike my family I found them most interesting, memories of my human life long vanished I often wondered had I been like them, I noticed Jessica Stanley and shuddered - Just not like her, she met my eyes and then her cheeks did flush a bright red, jasper tightened next to me, obviously following my gaze, it was then I saw her, and the immense strength it took to stay rooted surprised me, I yearned to glide over, to hold her tight, to bite her already white neck, I didn't want to wait, I'd waited so long, we'd waited so long, she was in front of me as real as life itself. I could tell she was special already, different to the others, looking like a deer in head lights horrified by the attention I presumed, she hadn't seen me yet, disappointed I waited for her to turn but she didn't, willing for her to face me, to somehow see what I saw of our futures the image of our hands held, her wedding day, her death, her future all controlled by edwards emotions. Isabella Swan, my best friend, my sister she simply did not know it yet, it was just a matter of waiting.

 

Talie Delemere (19)

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Ahhh, wow!

I loved this tooo much!

'twas amazingggg! :D

xxx

awww cheers <3 :P

I liked writing as alice :YAHOO:

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Just as I like writing as Jasper. :P

 

Gourgeous Story, I love it!

Im not great at writing from a male perspective :D I had ideas for rosalie and esme too but I chose alice

and thank you <3

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I was going to do it from Emmet's POV, but I thought Jasper's would be more interesting to write about.

I just went and read your one, I like it a lot, it's nice to see jasper seem a little less angry lol, and a bit more vunerable!

 

voting is gonna be so so hard

 

edit: I had an idea for emmet along the lines of how he fell for rosalie, and how at first he was indimdated and stuff.... lol

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It's been said before but... Wow. That was really good, I loved reading it. Got to love Alice <3

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It's been said before but... Wow. That was really good, I loved reading it. Got to love Alice <3

Wow is always good! :P

thanks a lot :wub:

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I was going to do it from Emmet's POV, but I thought Jasper's would be more interesting to write about.

I just went and read your one, I like it a lot, it's nice to see jasper seem a little less angry lol, and a bit more vunerable!

 

voting is gonna be so so hard

 

edit: I had an idea for emmet along the lines of how he fell for rosalie, and how at first he was indimdated and stuff.... lol

 

 

Oh, thank you! :wub:

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I was going to do it from Emmet's POV, but I thought Jasper's would be more interesting to write about.

I just went and read your one, I like it a lot, it's nice to see jasper seem a little less angry lol, and a bit more vunerable!

 

voting is gonna be so so hard

 

edit: I had an idea for emmet along the lines of how he fell for rosalie, and how at first he was indimdated and stuff.... lol

 

 

Oh, thank you! :P

 

No worries, I've added a banner in :wub: <3 Got a bit carried away like

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Wow, that´s a very good story! An attempt to catch a glimpse into a mind that´s a mystery to us! Good job! :wub:

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That's amazing! Alice is such a mystery, i love seeing her POV for a change <3

 

 

Wow, that´s a very good story! An attempt to catch a glimpse into a mind that´s a mystery to us! Good job! :YAHOO:

Thanks both of you :D:wub:

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awesome. awesome. awesome.

 

i love alice, :D

 

xx

Again thanks <3 I love alice too!!

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I love this hun! Really great idea. I haven't read past the first chapter of Midnight Sun (it feels wrong), so I'm not sure what all is in that. This is how I imagined Alice would feel though, seeing her brother's future before her eyes. To finally see him happy and with his other half. I'm all for romance stories, and this is sort of a different take. Reading about Alice seeing Edward and Bella's wedding day though, that gave me chills. Thanks for sharing hun, and good luck in the competition!

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I love this hun! Really great idea. I haven't read past the first chapter of Midnight Sun (it feels wrong), so I'm not sure what all is in that. This is how I imagined Alice would feel though, seeing her brother's future before her eyes. To finally see him happy and with his other half. I'm all for romance stories, and this is sort of a different take. Reading about Alice seeing Edward and Bella's wedding day though, that gave me chills. Thanks for sharing hun, and good luck in the competition!

I had to read it ;) and ive only just realised theres a tad of focus on having read that to truley understand what im talking about lol

 

And thanks so so much :vader:

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I loved this, you have all the characters and their actions just right =]

Thank you :P I tried to do that so Im really glad ive managed to :D

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