cosmic_llin Posted January 7, 2006 Share Posted January 7, 2006 Long Day Disclaimer: Stargate and all related characters, events and places belong to MGM - I am just using them for this non-profit story! Words: 428 ‘Daniel Jackson,’ said Teal’c, loudly. Several people looked up at him, and one woman tutted. ‘Ssh!’ said Daniel. ‘Museums are traditionally quiet places, Teal’c.’ ‘I apologise for failing to observe the traditions of your planet…’ ‘That’s country, Teal’c, country. Remember? I don’t want you to get into trouble…’ ‘Of course. The traditions of your country.’ Teal’c self-consciously pulled his baseball cap lower over his forehead. ‘I will endeavour to be quiet from now on, however, I…’ ‘What is it, Teal’c?’ ‘Is it necessary for us to view so many works of art and historical artifacts?’ ‘I’m just trying to show you a little of Earth’s history, Teal’c! I thought you were interested in this sort of thing!’ ‘I am, Daniel Jackson, but we have been here,’ he checked his watch, ‘five hours, and I must return to Stargate Command in a further two hours. You led me to believe that I would see more of your planet, and instead I have seen only interior spaces and pieces of rock that all seem alike.’ ‘Teal’c, they aren’t just pieces of rock! But… that’s not the point, I see that. I’m sorry, I guess I just got carried away…’ ‘And I have not eaten in some time…’ ‘Sorry…’ ‘And when O’Neill took me out for the day we visited a place where food was served while visual and auditory data was displayed on a large screen. In that place also, there were cultural artifacts on the walls. But it was not required to speak quietly.’ ‘I know Jack took you to Planet Hollywood, but that isn’t…’ ‘And when Major Carter was my companion for the day, we visited a vast parkland where we saw many things. I rode on a rollercoaster. I consumed frozen dairy products.’ Teal’c looked stoic, but he was beginning to speak more urgently, and he was standing very close, towering over Daniel, who cleared his thoat nervously. ‘I didn’t…’ ‘I am not yet allowed to leave Stargate Command on my own. I am dependent on the few humans I know to guide me and teach me your ways. And yet you have forced me to spend five hours looking at pieces of rock. This is a betrayal, Daniel Jackson. A betrayal of the very worst kind.’ ‘Oh, God, Teal’c, I…’ Daniel stopped and stared at Teal’c. ‘You’re joking,’ he said, flatly. He raised an eyebrow. ‘I am, Daniel Jackson.’ ‘Well, that’s a relief…’ Daniel sighed. ‘Nevertheless, I believe we have seen all there is to see here. May we now go to purchase frozen dairy products?’ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderators mrsclairecarter Posted January 7, 2006 Moderators Share Posted January 7, 2006 coool story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cosmic_llin Posted January 7, 2006 Author Share Posted January 7, 2006 Thank you very much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 7, 2006 Share Posted January 7, 2006 Ah frozen diary products of the ben and jerry's variety i assume lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cosmic_llin Posted January 7, 2006 Author Share Posted January 7, 2006 Naturally! Thanks for reading it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superflower Posted January 9, 2006 Share Posted January 9, 2006 I like! I could imagine the characters really well as I read it, its good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cosmic_llin Posted January 9, 2006 Author Share Posted January 9, 2006 I could imagine the characters really well as I read it Thank you! That's just what I was going for! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowflake_Shona Posted January 9, 2006 Share Posted January 9, 2006 Love the story! I can SO imagine this happening! It's just like Daniel to carried away in a museum! (Unfortunely I'm sad like that, and I would enjoy five hours in a museum!) Love your work! Keep it up! Sweet little scene! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cosmic_llin Posted January 9, 2006 Author Share Posted January 9, 2006 Unfortunely I'm sad like that, and I would enjoy five hours in a museum! Hehe, me too, but somehow I can't see it being Teal'c's cup of tea! Thanks a lot for reading! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 9, 2006 Share Posted January 9, 2006 Love the story! I can SO imagine this happening! It's just like Daniel to carried away in a museum! (Unfortunely I'm sad like that, and I would enjoy five hours in a museum!) Love your work! Keep it up! Sweet little scene! 910600[/snapback] Nothing sad about that especially in DJ's company XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elenmai Posted January 13, 2006 Share Posted January 13, 2006 (edited) Yes, well. All that time in a museum would get kinda boring. Although Danny would liven it up a bit! Edited January 13, 2006 by elenmai Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cosmic_llin Posted January 17, 2006 Author Share Posted January 17, 2006 You obviously haven't been going to the right museums! Some of them are wicked cool and you can just spend all day there! Of course, Danny would make practically any situation you could possibly find yourself in that little bit more interesting... but I'm preaching to the choir here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
surfy_sah Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 I like it it's cool I hope that you won't die because Maggie is going to LFaCC4? surfy sah xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cosmic_llin Posted January 18, 2006 Author Share Posted January 18, 2006 Thank you! Isn't that Maggie Grace rather than Maggie Smith? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
surfy_sah Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 yes! woops I dunno how I came up with that but I love Maggie Smith! Hook erm yes soz for going OT yey frozen yoghurt surfy sah xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cosmic_llin Posted January 18, 2006 Author Share Posted January 18, 2006 Hehe, that's ok, easy mistake to make. Hook is the best!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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