Evie_Nitram Posted December 27, 2005 Share Posted December 27, 2005 Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations owned by JK Rowling and publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury. No copyright infringement is intended or to be infered. N.B. If only one entry is allowed, I may withdraw this in preference for a different story... 450 words is a really small limit for anything of any depth to it! My other stories are much better... Voldemort's Nightmare The boy was with me again… the red-haired brat that resembled the only Wizarding family I was yet to infiltrate. Of course, he wasn’t the only one – The brunette girl, the filthy mud-blood, was there as well. I knew I saw through his eyes, Harry’s, and wished intensely that these visions would stop interrupted my much-needed sleep. And yet there was something about the activities of that boy that intrigued me… This vision began no different from the others – the three disgusting children set about their homework in the Gryffindor Common Room, which itself had once fascinated me inexorably. Then they had packed up their books and gone traipsing around the castle after dark. It was against the school rules, I felt they knew it, as I had also known it in my day, and it had neither stopped me then, nor stopped them now. They did not keep to the castle, but out into the grounds they crept, hidden beneath an invisibility cloak, like the cowards they are. I was careful to keep my own thoughts and opinions from the boys’ mind. The occlumency lessons had never been wasted on me! They crept towards the forbidden forest, so long was it my hiding place and home that I felt a rising sense of anticipation. There was a chill in the air, and a silvery mist rose from the forest floor, creating a dense, cold atmosphere “I don’t like it in here!†Ron whined “Well you didn’t have to come!†Hermione retorted. That silenced him. My hatred bubbled violently beneath my skin, and the boy felt it, searing pain through his scar… how I longed to know the secret of the connection between us. I could not control it until I knew why it existed. And then it happened! As the boy collapsed in agony, the invisibility cloak slipped from their shoulders and revealed them. From behind a tree, Severus Snape slunk quietly, wand raised. “How dare you follow me in here! Your insolence will not be tolerated any longer… Dumbledore and Sirius were fools to trust you into my care, Potter…†Snape hissed slowly. “Run!†I heard the boy whisper urgently to his friends. Without hesitating. they bolted like cowardly lions, into the forest. Snape was hot on my heels, baring down on me, his wand outstretched. I met his eyes, whites full around the edges… “Avada…†He spoke, and I jolted awake. The nightmare disturbed me. I knew not why such a dream would scare me, or how it was that this was not a true vision, like all the others had been… The boy was getting stronger! I shivered again… that scared me too. By Lizzi Bradbury Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiccawise21 Posted January 3, 2006 Share Posted January 3, 2006 oooh i like it. very cool. i love the way that its written through both harry and voldemorts eyes. well done. =x= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evie_Nitram Posted January 3, 2006 Author Share Posted January 3, 2006 Thanks - glad some one enjoyed it!! lol... I hate having to cut the fics down so much to fit into the 450 word limit... even my short stories are generally about 1000 words for anything of any importance to happen! I'm just putting finishes to a second entry, that I prefer more than this one... Lizzi xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiccawise21 Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 it is a very small word count but i think you did it very well. =x= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 I would have thought they'd be more chipmunks singing its a small world or pink fluffy things and darleks - where were the darleks? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evie_Nitram Posted January 6, 2006 Author Share Posted January 6, 2006 I'll put Daleks in my next Harry Potter fic, if you can learn to spell them!! ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 I'm never going to learn to spell - especially when word will tell me I'm wrong anyway XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cosmic_llin Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Ooh, this is very cool! Interesting use of perspective - I don't think many people would think to do something from Voldemort's point of view like this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 14, 2006 Share Posted January 14, 2006 Voldemort is severly misunderstood - so nobody would think of showing it from his perspective XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evie_Nitram Posted January 15, 2006 Author Share Posted January 15, 2006 ... except me... and that's only because we all know Harry and Voldemort share a brain... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 with lily.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evie_Nitram Posted January 15, 2006 Author Share Posted January 15, 2006 ... to damn right... heheheheh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 It actually explains an awful lot about the Harry Potter series if you think of it like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evie_Nitram Posted January 15, 2006 Author Share Posted January 15, 2006 Yeah it does... the three are clearly caught up in some nasty web of magic!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 Well that and there is clearly at least on schiz individual running around Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evie_Nitram Posted January 15, 2006 Author Share Posted January 15, 2006 Ohhhh ME!!! ::waves arms crazily:: That's ME!!! ::Slaps myself around the face:: Shut up, Stupid! You don't want them to know!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 15, 2006 Share Posted January 15, 2006 I was actually gonna say Sirius and Voldemort coz up until OOTP they don't ever appear together at any time! and even then was Voldemort there when Sirius was? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evie_Nitram Posted January 16, 2006 Author Share Posted January 16, 2006 An interesting thought... perhaps we could work that into a fic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 17, 2006 Share Posted January 17, 2006 I think it's doable - may involbve Hermionie being a squirrel and a meling clock in there somewhere as well lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evie_Nitram Posted January 19, 2006 Author Share Posted January 19, 2006 Isn't it funny how all the newbies posting fanfics only read/review each others' stories?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 Yeh I've noticed that too - strangely enough - seems rather what's the word - sussed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evie_Nitram Posted January 19, 2006 Author Share Posted January 19, 2006 I wonder if they'll use the ISP addresses to determine whether it's just one person, or friends posting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 One would hope so - wouldn't seem fair otherwise - though with aol you can't always tell because the isp changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evie_Nitram Posted January 19, 2006 Author Share Posted January 19, 2006 True... I suppose they can only come up for prizes once though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tippin Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 lol yeh this is very true lol XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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