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mii 8 yr old sister just read, this and she hates twilight!!! I know, strange, but that isn't the point, she has just run downstairs and started reading it!!! It is so sweet!!! Love it

I loved reading this, it is sooo good

this is sooo good, i luved reading it!! Well done on a great Fan Fic

This is so good I love it, it is nice to understand a little bit more about Renesmee's feelings towards Jacob It's amazing, awwwwwwwwww

Thankyou soo much.. i really appreciate it

Sorry but I am obssesed with writing and i just need opinions in my work!! Please Comment, i know you must be bored of me! Lost Love “Edward, Edward!!!!!†Rosalie's voice screamed at me down the phone. “What Rosalie, calm down!†I replied calmly. “No Edward I will not, Bella…..Bella is….†“What Rosalie what is Bella?†I asked anxiety filling every part of my body, a sudden jolt of worry bolted through me sending a chill down my spine. What could have happened to my Bella? I mean what could have happened to Bella? She was not mine anymore, I had left her, and now I regretted it. “Edward, Bella is… Dead.†Her sudden comment slammed down hard on me, I finally managed to understand what they meant, “What, Rosalie if this is some horrific joke…†“Edward it isn’t, Alice saw her, she jumped of a cliff, and she never…†Rosalie paused, “Came back up.†By this point my body was filled with rage, I had driven Bella to suicide! I had left her bleeding, and now she was dead. My soft, warm Bella, had nobody tried to save her, by leaving her I had put her in more danger. “EDWARD, EDWARDâ€Rosalie yelled down the phone obviously wanting me to reply, I couldn’t speak, I hung up. My Bella, gone forever, now there is no one, I can love, my only love lost forever, I could never see her blush red again, never touch her soft, warm skin again, without her in my world, there was no point in my being, my world was lost and pointless. I must find a way to be with her again, to tell her how much I love her, to tell her that I didn’t want to leave and how my dead heart broke when I did, but now none of these words could be told, she was gone and there was only one way to be with her again... Death…

Glimmering How can she take everything so coolly??? I was a mythological monster, lying down in this fairy tale meadow, Bella belonged here, so beautiful and radiant, whereas I belonged in a horror film, with dark, dank alleys and mortals screaming as I got closer, that is how a human should react but not Bella, she was always so calm, so encouraging. She really didn’t care what I was. Bella began playing around with my fingers, still staring into my eyes, I was still waiting for her to be disgusted, to run away in terror, but no not Bella, I was lying in the middle of shimmering emerald grass, I too was shimmering, yet Bella, carried on as if everything where normal. She began stroking my arm, down my veins, the warmth and calmness of her touch, made my cold, dead heart want to sing, I loved her and seeing as she wasn’t running or screaming, she must love me to, I smiled mentally to myself. She ran her hand down my arm and back to my hand, she intertwined my cold hand, with her beautiful warm one, I sighed with contentment. Would I ever get over the fact that she wanted me, not that insignificant little rat, Newton? No I answered myself, never. All I knew was that she was now my Bella, I smiled to myself, knowing that this fact was true, Vampire or not she was still mine.

Glimmering How can she take everything so coolly??? I was a mythological monster, lying down in this fairy tale meadow, Bella belonged here, so beautiful and radiant, whereas I belonged in a horror film, with dark, dank alleys and mortals screaming as I got closer, that is how a human should react but not Bella, she was always so calm, so encouraging. She really didn’t care what I was. Bella began playing around with my fingers, still staring into my eyes, I was still waiting for her to be disgusted, to run away in terror, but no not Bella, I was lying in the middle of shimmering emerald grass, I too was shimmering, yet Bella, carried on as if everything where normal. She began stroking my arm, down my veins, the warmth and calmness of her touch, made my cold, dead heart want to sing, I loved her and seeing as she wasn’t running or screaming, she must love me to, I smiled mentally to myself. She ran her hand down my arm and back to my hand, she intertwined my cold hand, with her beautiful warm one, I sighed with contentment. Would I ever get over the fact that she wanted me, not that insignificant little rat, Newton? No I answered myself, never. All I knew was that she was now my Bella, I smiled to myself, knowing that this fact was true, Vampire or not she was still mine.

Hii I absoloutley luved it, that is not bad writing!! gr8 job ily xx

Thankyou, sooo much. I really appreciate it.

Sorry, this is my first fan fic so it is probably rubbish, Some of the lines might be wrong as i did it off by memory. Sorry. Changing Minds How could she want this, I would give up everything I have to be like her, even if that meant giving up my immortal equal, Emmett. Why would she want to have a stone, cold, blood thirsty mind and body? I can only think of the one reason. Edward, my brother, by our way of life. If I’d of had the choice there is now way I would of chosen this life, this monstourous, beastly, horror film life. Who would want the inevitable thirst, the inexorable smell of human blood. No way to stop once human blood was spilt. Just the thought makes my throat burn. But now it is my turn, I have got to tell Bella, my story, why I have been so terribly wretched to her, how I became a, hideous monster of the night. Now it is my turn to change her mind, remind her of the human life she could lead, stay warm, soft, and the most important thing mortal. Although I have shown nothing but hatred towards Bella, I hope she understands my pleads for her to stay human. She must know that Edward feels this way, that he wants her to stay human, although he is dying inside, to know that he can not spend the rest of forever with her. However much he wants it, he believes it is selfish of him to want it. She can live the rest of her life with him, but he can’t live the rest of his with her. I am Rosalie Hale, and I am going to tell Bella about my life and how I wanted it to be and how hers could be without immortality. I took a deep breath and knocked on the door “ What, Alice†Bella hissed. I took another deep breath “ Bella, it is Rosalie, can I talk to you for her second?†Now it is my turn, to tell my horrific story and convince Bella she is wrong. “ Of course, Rosalie, come in.†By Emma Jeffries 11