Mrs.CharCullen Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 (edited) A Kiss We were standing in the clearing, near the reservation. It was spring and one of Forks few sunny days. There wasn’t a cloud in the sky. The rays of light sparkled on the grass and the scent of flowers hung thick in the air. Now was the moment, I thought. Far enough from the house so dad wouldn’t here me… Plucking up my courage I turned and Jake was standing closer than I had expected. My senses were usually so sharp; I could hear a twig falling from miles away. I was sure he could here my heart beating faster. What was wrong with me? Jacob was just a friend, my very best friend, but nevertheless just a friend. But lately… I had never noticed before how many different colors his russet fur had in the sun or how beautiful his dark eyes were. The way his laughter made my heart glow and his smile made me want to sing. How I felt unsure when he wasn’t by my side and hours felt like days when he had to leave to go on patrol. He looked up and I saw the quizzical look on his face. As always he was on his guard, worried I wasn’t perfectly alright. Slowly, I put my hand on his face. If I weren’t half vampire I was sure it would be shaking. I felt his hot breath on the palm of my hand and sighed. I saw the surprise on his face as he heard what I was telling him. Not telling but showing. Not words but colors, bright and shiny, everything that was Jacob, his smile, his laugh, images of us together, running side by side, racing, having fun. Even in years to come I could never forgot that moment of pure bliss. I looked into his eyes, leaned forward and felt his lips on mine. "Nessie..?" "Yes?" "You’re my gravity… you know that?" I laughed. Mom had told me how much she loved dad. I had never understood. Now I knew. Charlotte a.k.a MRs.CharCullen 16 Edited February 14, 2009 by MRs.CharCullen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angelicbella Posted February 5, 2009 Share Posted February 5, 2009 That's cute!! Loved it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs.CharCullen Posted February 5, 2009 Author Share Posted February 5, 2009 Thanks I was a bit nervous, I actually suck at writing anything ( Im more of a math person) but I wanted to try anyway :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iDazzle Posted February 10, 2009 Share Posted February 10, 2009 omg, so cuuuuuute You'll never say you can't write again!! (your dutch just sucks, that's all xD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs.CharCullen Posted February 10, 2009 Author Share Posted February 10, 2009 omg, so cuuuuuute You'll never say you can't write again!! (your dutch just sucks, that's all xD) Youre just saying that cuz you have to sit next to me in Bio and chemistry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hails Posted February 11, 2009 Share Posted February 11, 2009 haha what are you two like? Its a cute story, nice perspective Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs.CharCullen Posted February 11, 2009 Author Share Posted February 11, 2009 haha what are you two like? Its a cute story, nice perspective Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lizzy Posted February 11, 2009 Share Posted February 11, 2009 That should totally be the next book- Renesmee and Jacob! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs.CharCullen Posted February 12, 2009 Author Share Posted February 12, 2009 That should totally be the next book- Renesmee and Jacob! Yeah it would be so cute Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LibLob-x Posted February 12, 2009 Share Posted February 12, 2009 Really sweet - loved it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs.CharCullen Posted February 13, 2009 Author Share Posted February 13, 2009 Really sweet - loved it! awwhh.. thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xVickyCullenx Posted February 14, 2009 Share Posted February 14, 2009 Awwwwww! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soraya Posted February 17, 2009 Share Posted February 17, 2009 Awww how sweet! Nice idea with Renesmee's P.O.V by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs.CharCullen Posted February 17, 2009 Author Share Posted February 17, 2009 Awww how sweet! Nice idea with Renesmee's P.O.V by the way Aww thanks im glad you liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jodie.rawr Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 It's interesting reading from Nessie's point of view, and it's really sweet to read about her feelings for Jacob. Totally cute <3 Good job hun :) xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs.CharCullen Posted February 18, 2009 Author Share Posted February 18, 2009 It's interesting reading from Nessie's point of view, and it's really sweet to read about her feelings for Jacob. Totally cute <3 Good job hun :) xxx Im so glad someone actually likes it never done this before Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
izzymon172 Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 wOw! that was awesome! i admit i never really liked nessie and jake together, but thanks to your story, i'm warming up to the idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs.CharCullen Posted February 21, 2009 Author Share Posted February 21, 2009 wOw! that was awesome! i admit i never really liked nessie and jake together, but thanks to your story, i'm warming up to the idea Oh yay Spreading the love and thank you!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lollipopz12 Posted February 21, 2009 Share Posted February 21, 2009 This is so good I love it, it is nice to understand a little bit more about Renesmee's feelings towards Jacob It's amazing, awwwwwwwwww Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs.CharCullen Posted February 22, 2009 Author Share Posted February 22, 2009 This is so good I love it, it is nice to understand a little bit more about Renesmee's feelings towards Jacob It's amazing, awwwwwwwwww aaww thank you Im so glad you like it I just wanted to do something different , hopefully there will come a next book about them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marissahedley89 Posted February 23, 2009 Share Posted February 23, 2009 I absolutely loved it!!! It was so heartwarming! It's about time Jacob got a slice of pie :) You're a really good writer, don't feel self-conscious about it x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs.CharCullen Posted February 23, 2009 Author Share Posted February 23, 2009 Aww thanks you too!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Officially_Robsessed Posted May 24, 2009 Share Posted May 24, 2009 omg i completely loved that. w o w it was so cute and i always wondered wat wud happen with them two, its nice to have a story to put with them. and i found it so weird referring to edward and bella as mum and dad, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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