Jodie.rawr Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 (edited) He was trying to fight back, the look on his face told me that much, but it just wasn't happening. He couldn't look after both of us at the same time. The tracker had it easy; just trying to get rid of Edward so he could move on to the main course... to me. I tried to scream a warning when I saw his glossy white teeth, covered in my blood, gaining inches on Edwards glittering body. Until that moment I'd thought their skins were impenetrable. Edward roared in pain, his eyes widened as the tracker threw him onto the hard floor as though he was merely the equivalent of a child’s doll, and then he grabbed his wounded flesh. Edward turned his head to look at me; his eyes reflected so much sorrow and regret that they made me sob even harder. I wanted to crawl over to him, to hold him close and kiss him for what I now knew for sure would be the final time, but I couldn't move. The only thing I could do was to lie there, in a pool of my own blood, and cry my pointless tears. He looked at me and time seemed to stop, all my pain evaporated as he mouthed the words "I love you." And then the moment was over. The tracker smiled, grabbed another handful of Edward’s perfect skin, and pulled. And my whole world came crashing down. I sat up sobbing, screaming Edward's name, my hands were trembling and my head was spinning. The whole of my back was covered in a thin layer of cold sweat and I struggled to regain my usual breathing pattern. Slowly, without warning a pair of iron strong arms circled my waist and pulled me back down onto the bed. "Bella, sweetheart calm down! Shh my love, it was a dream. It was only a dream." His velvet voice and soothing words put an abrupt end to my screaming and I turned around in his arms, wrapping myself into his stone like body and buried my face in his cold chest. He had successfully stopped the screaming, but not the sobbing. I continued to cry and he let me; he knew what was best for me; sometimes I thought he knew me better than I did. He pressed his ice cold lips to my forehead and took a few deep breaths close to my nose; I could feel the warm air escaping his mouth. He knew his smell soothed me and the close proximity to his body seemed to do the trick, after a few moments the sobbing turned into silent tears. He kissed the salty tracks on my cheeks, tasting those tears, and hummed my lullaby softly. The calming process seemed to last forever to me but in fact the time that elapsed from my screaming fit to my quiet cries had been almost nonexistent. I had come to realise that he had become very talented at soothing me. Jodie Mortimer, 18 Edited February 4, 2009 by Jodierawr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiccawise21 Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 awww. that was just adorable! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jodie.rawr Posted February 4, 2009 Author Share Posted February 4, 2009 Thank you very much :):) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angelicbella Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 So sweet :) I do like your writing style, it is very close to SM's! Keep up the great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jodie.rawr Posted February 4, 2009 Author Share Posted February 4, 2009 ooh thank you so much! I'm going to read through everybodies tonight =] xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jodie.rawr Posted February 8, 2009 Author Share Posted February 8, 2009 wow, i've just realised who 'SM' is, i'm such a loser. amazing compliment, i'm actually shocked haha. thank you so much :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xVickyCullenx Posted February 10, 2009 Share Posted February 10, 2009 Awww! I loved it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jodie.rawr Posted February 11, 2009 Author Share Posted February 11, 2009 Thank you :):) I'm glad you liked it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timpe Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 The tone of your writing is so close to Stephenie's - really nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jodie.rawr Posted February 18, 2009 Author Share Posted February 18, 2009 Thank you so much! I'm really flattered that you think that, I don't think that's a comparison that I will ever get used to haha. xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs.CharCullen Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 Aaww that was really good Loved it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lizzieice Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 Really good idea, loved it :) Lizzie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jodie.rawr Posted February 18, 2009 Author Share Posted February 18, 2009 Aaww that was really good Loved it!! Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :) Really good idea, loved it :) Lizzie Thank you xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aliicullen Posted February 18, 2009 Share Posted February 18, 2009 I love it, it's so sweet! It's like it could've been taken out of the actual book. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jodie.rawr Posted February 18, 2009 Author Share Posted February 18, 2009 Thank youuu <3 Gah I blumming wish, Stephenie is in a whole different league to me haha! xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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