tomcasstillie Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 (edited) I was sat in an armchair examining my fingernails. They were clean, despite the fact I’d just been feeding. There wasn’t a spot of blood on me. I was a clean eater. I looked up into the mirror and two blood red eyes and a pale face looked back at me. I’d decided I loved who I was, what I could do. Being me was fun. Being a vampire is fun. I’d decided I wasn’t going to be depressed anymore. It was pointless. Of course I’d still try and win Aro over. He’d not been satisfied with what I could do, well not truly satisfied, I mean he pretends to be impressed but I can tell he’s thinking about her and about how he wants her to join us. Ugh the very thought of her joining us and us and her becoming just us. It made me ill. Aro would absorb himself in desperately trying to get inside her brain. She’d be his favourite she’d be the best he’d show her off and not me. Who cares what Aro thinks? Actually I care. A lot. Stupid Volturi, Stupid Bella and Stupid me. Why did I care so much, well I still do. I looked up in the mirror again. My pale face was framed in short brown ringlets and I had wide, dark red eyes set deep in my face. I sighed as my thoughts wondered back to Bella. I look better than her too I thought selfishly. This was getting ridiculous. I’d been thinking about Bella for days, comparing myself to her, thinking about her. I couldn’t stand her, I couldn’t stand thinking about her anymore. I don’t think vampires can get ill physically, but I knew I was ill mentally and it was all because of her. It was making me truly ill to think of her, I hadn’t been talking to anyone either. Even Alec had picked up on my illness as a few days ago he had commented that I “look awful†and Aro thankfully did still care about me as, although I had tried to avoid contact with him, when he’d brushed past me in the hall he had said “Jane dear one don’t worry,†Just thinking about my masters reassuring words now made me warm inside and I smiled. I didn’t need to think about her and I wouldn’t. Not now, there’s no need to worry now, but when she’s turned maybe then I’ll panic…a lot. By Sarah Todd Age 15 Edited January 31, 2009 by _Sarah-Twilight_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeahBlack. Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 Oohhh, nicee :) Good idea writing in Jane's POV I loved it! Very good xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightshadewolf Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 wow i love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomcasstillie Posted February 1, 2009 Author Share Posted February 1, 2009 Thanks guys :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chimmykins Posted February 1, 2009 Share Posted February 1, 2009 Ah, Jane. I like it, you captured the character really well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soraya Posted February 17, 2009 Share Posted February 17, 2009 (edited) Wow, I love it Go SARAH WOOOOP Edited February 17, 2009 by TwilightT.S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammi.C Posted February 25, 2009 Share Posted February 25, 2009 i think its great great thinking form Janes POV !!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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