I wasn’t sure if I was prepared for this. There wasn’t a handbook to tell me what to do, but I remembered clearly 'the talk' Charlie had with Bella. I had heard every embarrassing word and cringed at the memory.
How had this happened? She was still my baby girl. She had grown up too fast. She stood in front of me in the lobby, my beautiful teenage daughter Renesmee, stunning in a midnight blue dress with her long brown ringlets resting gently on her shoulders, just like her mother on her prom night. After being bombarded all that evening, I knew what thoughts adolescent boys had about teenage girls, not that either of them were really teenagers.
I took an unnecessary inward breath.
“The answer is still and always has been no.” I stated, trying to stay calm.
“But I love him, we are meant to be together!” Renesmee shouted, clearly upset.
“No you’re not!” I was fighting a battle I knew I would ultimately lose, but the battle itself was necessary all the same.
“But it’s just…” Renesmee hesitated “.. just prom Dad, I’m not marrying him.”
Thank God, I chuckled at her attempt at negotiation.
“Trust me, who you go to prom with could change your life.” I smiled as I thought of myself and Bella, but I had to get my point across to Renesmee.
“No,” I growled at her, “I forbid you to go on a date with…that dog.” I hated using that term, he was a good friend now, but I needed my daughter to listen to me.
“Ok, fine!” She screamed at me, tears now in her eyes, “Who would you rather I go with?”
“You know,” I almost whispered, getting irritated now. Any human boy would be better for her than a werewolf.
Just at that moment I heard the familiar sound of a Volkswagen Rabbit coming up the driveway.
“He’s here, too late now, I’m going with him and you can’t stop me.” Her mouth broke out into a big sarcastic grin, a smile of victory.
“Two things,” I needed to say something else before he got to the door. “Be careful-”
“Yes Dad.” Renesmee rolled her eyes.
“Call me immediately if anything bad happens and I’ll come and get you.” And I’ll kill that filthy mongrel if he hurts my daughter, friend or not, I promised himself. I cleared my throat.
“And..umm, I’ve put a can of pepper spray in your bag.”
Bella’s loud hysterical laugh drifted through from the lounge, “Edward, just let her go!”
I was outnumbered and I knew it.
The door opened and there stood a dashing young man in a tuxedo, patiently waiting for his prom date. Renesmee looked at him with love in her eyes. I felt my heart break. It was the look Bella gave me. I sighed in defeat.
“Evening Seth.” Well, I had to admit, it could be worse.
Who knew two werewolves could imprint on the same girl?
Katie Harris
FANFIC COMPETITION ENTRY
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katie101
, Feb 18 2009 12:48 AM
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#1
Posted 18 February 2009 - 12:48 AM
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"I'd seen Dr. Cullen before, of course, yet I couldn't help but be struck again by his youth, his outrageous perfection."
Wishes for ET3 - Michael Sheen, Peter, Elizabeth, Nikki, Cam would be great and Jackson + 100 Monkeys.
or just me and Peter in a room would be fine ha ha . Peter for ET3, ET4...
I only read the books/watched the film because Peter was in it. It's all his fault I'm now obsessed with Twilight!
Have met: Rob Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, Chris Weitz ,(seen Taylor & Dakota close up but didn't 'meet' them) Bronson Pelletier, Rachelle Lefevre, Edi Gathegi, Chaske Spencer, Tyson Houseman, Gil Birmingham, Charlie Bewley, Daniel Cudmore, Jose Zuniga, Jamie Campbell Bower (+The Darling Buds), Peter Facinelli, Kellan Lutz, Ashley Greene, Alex Meraz, Justin Chon, Christian Serratos, Ryan Rottman, Tanner Beard (Kellans friends!), Bobby Long, Marcus Foster, Tom Sturridge, Nelsan Ellis, James Marsters, Nick Brendon, Mark Lutz, James Leary, Anthony Head, Alyson Hannigan, Julie Benz, Mercedes Mcnab, Jewel Staite, Oliver & James Phelps, Chris Rankin, Misha Collins, John Barrowman, Eve Myles, Sendhil Ramamurthy, Jimmy Jean Louis, Keeley Hawes, Anna Walton, Peter Mayhew, Dave Prowse, Kenny Baker, Edward Furlong, Mark Ryan, Danny John Jules, Craig Charles, Tom Baker, Sean Maguire, Spike Spencer, Hanson, Sandi Thom, Toploader, Jonathan Wilkes, Daniel Macpherson, Dominic Orange (Jason from Take Thats brother! lol), Jon Thaxton, Junior Witter, Frank Bruno, Jean-Christophe Novelli. saw whole HP cast close up at HBP premiere, didnt meet them though.
Want to meet (or just see from a distance would be ok..): cast of anything Twilight, Whedonverse, Harry Potter, Heroes, Gossip Girl, One Tree Hill, Doctor Who, Torchwood, CSI, Blood Ties, The O.C, Roswell, Dawsons Creek, The Lost Boys, Underworld, From Dusk Til Dawn, Blade, Star Wars, Back To The Future, Lord Of The Rings, also Gerard Butler, Clive Owen, Nic Cage, Kirsten Dunst, Reese Witherspoon, Michelle Rodriguez, Piper Perabo, Devon Sawa, Take That, Joe Calzaghe, Lewis Hamilton, David Beckham, Thierry Henry, Cesc Fabregas, Theo Walcott …oh the list is endless
* www.zazzle.co.uk/madaboutvampires * www.MadAboutVampires.blogspot.com *
* Peter Facinelli's personal stalker - 8 years and counting.. *
"I'd seen Dr. Cullen before, of course, yet I couldn't help but be struck again by his youth, his outrageous perfection."
Wishes for ET3 - Michael Sheen, Peter, Elizabeth, Nikki, Cam would be great and Jackson + 100 Monkeys.
or just me and Peter in a room would be fine ha ha . Peter for ET3, ET4...
I only read the books/watched the film because Peter was in it. It's all his fault I'm now obsessed with Twilight!
Have met: Rob Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, Chris Weitz ,(seen Taylor & Dakota close up but didn't 'meet' them) Bronson Pelletier, Rachelle Lefevre, Edi Gathegi, Chaske Spencer, Tyson Houseman, Gil Birmingham, Charlie Bewley, Daniel Cudmore, Jose Zuniga, Jamie Campbell Bower (+The Darling Buds), Peter Facinelli, Kellan Lutz, Ashley Greene, Alex Meraz, Justin Chon, Christian Serratos, Ryan Rottman, Tanner Beard (Kellans friends!), Bobby Long, Marcus Foster, Tom Sturridge, Nelsan Ellis, James Marsters, Nick Brendon, Mark Lutz, James Leary, Anthony Head, Alyson Hannigan, Julie Benz, Mercedes Mcnab, Jewel Staite, Oliver & James Phelps, Chris Rankin, Misha Collins, John Barrowman, Eve Myles, Sendhil Ramamurthy, Jimmy Jean Louis, Keeley Hawes, Anna Walton, Peter Mayhew, Dave Prowse, Kenny Baker, Edward Furlong, Mark Ryan, Danny John Jules, Craig Charles, Tom Baker, Sean Maguire, Spike Spencer, Hanson, Sandi Thom, Toploader, Jonathan Wilkes, Daniel Macpherson, Dominic Orange (Jason from Take Thats brother! lol), Jon Thaxton, Junior Witter, Frank Bruno, Jean-Christophe Novelli. saw whole HP cast close up at HBP premiere, didnt meet them though.
Want to meet (or just see from a distance would be ok..): cast of anything Twilight, Whedonverse, Harry Potter, Heroes, Gossip Girl, One Tree Hill, Doctor Who, Torchwood, CSI, Blood Ties, The O.C, Roswell, Dawsons Creek, The Lost Boys, Underworld, From Dusk Til Dawn, Blade, Star Wars, Back To The Future, Lord Of The Rings, also Gerard Butler, Clive Owen, Nic Cage, Kirsten Dunst, Reese Witherspoon, Michelle Rodriguez, Piper Perabo, Devon Sawa, Take That, Joe Calzaghe, Lewis Hamilton, David Beckham, Thierry Henry, Cesc Fabregas, Theo Walcott …oh the list is endless
#2
Posted 18 February 2009 - 11:09 AM
Haha, great twist!
#3
Posted 23 February 2009 - 04:01 PM
thanks to every one who has read this. its my first ever fanfic. hope you liked it. glad you liked the twist..
btw, the pepper spray comment. i laughed out loud when i thought of that .
a slightly extended version of this oneshot is at my fanfiction.net page. see my signature below
btw, the pepper spray comment. i laughed out loud when i thought of that .
a slightly extended version of this oneshot is at my fanfiction.net page. see my signature below
* www.twitter.com/vampirefreak101 * www.fanfiction.net/~katiecullen101 *
* www.zazzle.co.uk/madaboutvampires * www.MadAboutVampires.blogspot.com *
* Peter Facinelli's personal stalker - 8 years and counting.. *
"I'd seen Dr. Cullen before, of course, yet I couldn't help but be struck again by his youth, his outrageous perfection."
Wishes for ET3 - Michael Sheen, Peter, Elizabeth, Nikki, Cam would be great and Jackson + 100 Monkeys.
or just me and Peter in a room would be fine ha ha . Peter for ET3, ET4...
I only read the books/watched the film because Peter was in it. It's all his fault I'm now obsessed with Twilight!
Have met: Rob Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, Chris Weitz ,(seen Taylor & Dakota close up but didn't 'meet' them) Bronson Pelletier, Rachelle Lefevre, Edi Gathegi, Chaske Spencer, Tyson Houseman, Gil Birmingham, Charlie Bewley, Daniel Cudmore, Jose Zuniga, Jamie Campbell Bower (+The Darling Buds), Peter Facinelli, Kellan Lutz, Ashley Greene, Alex Meraz, Justin Chon, Christian Serratos, Ryan Rottman, Tanner Beard (Kellans friends!), Bobby Long, Marcus Foster, Tom Sturridge, Nelsan Ellis, James Marsters, Nick Brendon, Mark Lutz, James Leary, Anthony Head, Alyson Hannigan, Julie Benz, Mercedes Mcnab, Jewel Staite, Oliver & James Phelps, Chris Rankin, Misha Collins, John Barrowman, Eve Myles, Sendhil Ramamurthy, Jimmy Jean Louis, Keeley Hawes, Anna Walton, Peter Mayhew, Dave Prowse, Kenny Baker, Edward Furlong, Mark Ryan, Danny John Jules, Craig Charles, Tom Baker, Sean Maguire, Spike Spencer, Hanson, Sandi Thom, Toploader, Jonathan Wilkes, Daniel Macpherson, Dominic Orange (Jason from Take Thats brother! lol), Jon Thaxton, Junior Witter, Frank Bruno, Jean-Christophe Novelli. saw whole HP cast close up at HBP premiere, didnt meet them though.
Want to meet (or just see from a distance would be ok..): cast of anything Twilight, Whedonverse, Harry Potter, Heroes, Gossip Girl, One Tree Hill, Doctor Who, Torchwood, CSI, Blood Ties, The O.C, Roswell, Dawsons Creek, The Lost Boys, Underworld, From Dusk Til Dawn, Blade, Star Wars, Back To The Future, Lord Of The Rings, also Gerard Butler, Clive Owen, Nic Cage, Kirsten Dunst, Reese Witherspoon, Michelle Rodriguez, Piper Perabo, Devon Sawa, Take That, Joe Calzaghe, Lewis Hamilton, David Beckham, Thierry Henry, Cesc Fabregas, Theo Walcott …oh the list is endless
* www.zazzle.co.uk/madaboutvampires * www.MadAboutVampires.blogspot.com *
* Peter Facinelli's personal stalker - 8 years and counting.. *
"I'd seen Dr. Cullen before, of course, yet I couldn't help but be struck again by his youth, his outrageous perfection."
Wishes for ET3 - Michael Sheen, Peter, Elizabeth, Nikki, Cam would be great and Jackson + 100 Monkeys.
or just me and Peter in a room would be fine ha ha . Peter for ET3, ET4...
I only read the books/watched the film because Peter was in it. It's all his fault I'm now obsessed with Twilight!
Have met: Rob Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, Chris Weitz ,(seen Taylor & Dakota close up but didn't 'meet' them) Bronson Pelletier, Rachelle Lefevre, Edi Gathegi, Chaske Spencer, Tyson Houseman, Gil Birmingham, Charlie Bewley, Daniel Cudmore, Jose Zuniga, Jamie Campbell Bower (+The Darling Buds), Peter Facinelli, Kellan Lutz, Ashley Greene, Alex Meraz, Justin Chon, Christian Serratos, Ryan Rottman, Tanner Beard (Kellans friends!), Bobby Long, Marcus Foster, Tom Sturridge, Nelsan Ellis, James Marsters, Nick Brendon, Mark Lutz, James Leary, Anthony Head, Alyson Hannigan, Julie Benz, Mercedes Mcnab, Jewel Staite, Oliver & James Phelps, Chris Rankin, Misha Collins, John Barrowman, Eve Myles, Sendhil Ramamurthy, Jimmy Jean Louis, Keeley Hawes, Anna Walton, Peter Mayhew, Dave Prowse, Kenny Baker, Edward Furlong, Mark Ryan, Danny John Jules, Craig Charles, Tom Baker, Sean Maguire, Spike Spencer, Hanson, Sandi Thom, Toploader, Jonathan Wilkes, Daniel Macpherson, Dominic Orange (Jason from Take Thats brother! lol), Jon Thaxton, Junior Witter, Frank Bruno, Jean-Christophe Novelli. saw whole HP cast close up at HBP premiere, didnt meet them though.
Want to meet (or just see from a distance would be ok..): cast of anything Twilight, Whedonverse, Harry Potter, Heroes, Gossip Girl, One Tree Hill, Doctor Who, Torchwood, CSI, Blood Ties, The O.C, Roswell, Dawsons Creek, The Lost Boys, Underworld, From Dusk Til Dawn, Blade, Star Wars, Back To The Future, Lord Of The Rings, also Gerard Butler, Clive Owen, Nic Cage, Kirsten Dunst, Reese Witherspoon, Michelle Rodriguez, Piper Perabo, Devon Sawa, Take That, Joe Calzaghe, Lewis Hamilton, David Beckham, Thierry Henry, Cesc Fabregas, Theo Walcott …oh the list is endless
#4
Posted 23 February 2009 - 05:40 PM
Loved this!! I liked the ending
Love the way everyone has a different look on things... mines about nessie too but with jacob
Life sucks... and then you die
Finally someone to score around here!!
How do you drown a blond? Glue a mirror to the bottom of the pool
Finally someone to score around here!!
How do you drown a blond? Glue a mirror to the bottom of the pool
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