FANFIC COMPETITION ENTRY

[Lizzieice]

This is set at some point in Breaking Dawn...

 

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The Christmas lights twinkled as I watched Alice eagerly hand out the presents from under the tree. “Me first†she squealed as she energetically pulled a big black book full of colourful pages from the silver wrapping paper.

 

“I couldn’t think of anything to get you†Esme explained, “so I got you something from the heart. It’s a scrapbook of all the years you’ve been with us.â€

 

“Thank you so much Esme†Alice chimed as she darted to Esme’s side to give her a hug.

 

Emmet was next. He swiftly tore the paper off. “Twister!†he exclaimed. “Thanks Jazz.â€

 

“I hope you’re ready to get your butt seriously kicked bro†Jasper snorted.

 

Jacob didn’t even wait for Jasper to stop talking before he ripped off his paper. “Err, thanks Alice.. it’s a car part†he said sounding disappointed.

 

“It’s a part for a car that you’re going to build next year†Alice explained. “I thought I’d get you something you want, or at least something you’re going to want.â€

 

“Thanks Alice†Jacob said sounding excited. “Wow, I’m going to build another car!â€

 

Jasper had just opened his present and pulled out three paintball tickets. “They’re brilliant, thanks Rose†Jasper said looking genuinely pleased.

 

I was nervous as Carlisle prepared to open his gift next. “I thought I’d get you something that both you and Esme could enjoy†I announced as Carlisle opened the little black box containing two plane tickets to London. I felt relieved as his face broke into a huge smile.

 

“They’re lovely thank you Bella†he said as he crossed the room to embrace me.

 

Now it was Esme’s turn. She pulled out a silver necklace with a heart-shaped locket attached which she opened to reveal a picture of Edward, Renesmee and me. “Thank you Edward, it’s perfect†she cried before drawing him into a crushing hug.

 

“Edward, your present was so big†Carlisle announced “that I’ve already put it in place. It’s a piano for your cottage.â€

 

“Thanks so much Carlisle†Edward said in his angel like voice as they exchanged a hug.

 

“Bella†Emmet boomed “it’s your turn.†I’d been dreading this moment all morning. I laughed nervously as I slowly unwrapped the gift to reveal a white box with the word ‘Wii’ on it.

 

“It’s the latest games console†Emmet explained. “Jasper and I can’t wait to see you use it – we’ve taken bets on how many TVs you’ll get through!â€

 

“Thanks, now I can beat you at this too – just like our little arm wrestle†I replied, watching the smirk fall from his face.

 

Finally, Rosalie opened her present to reveal a plastic baby doll. She looked confusedly towards Jacob as liquid began trickling down her arms, the doll had wet itself. Jacob was rolling around on the floor, laughing so hard he could barely breathe. I thought I heard Edward laughing under his breath too. Rosalie stood up throwing the doll towards Jacob. “Stupid mutt†she spat.

 

By Elizabeth

[kinipella]

Lizzie! I LOVE it!

I was trying to think what I'd have bought them all if I had them for my secret santa and I don't think I could've topped your gifts! I loved Rosalie's doll.. and Jacob's random car part.

 

Genius idea :)

[Lizzieice]

Thanks i didn't know what to write about.

 

 

Lizzie xx

 

 

ps I CAN'T WAIT

[Miss Ragamuffin]

thats so cute! my favourite parts were emmett getting bella a wii just to see her go through tvs and the jacob doll bit I loved the whole thing with rosalie and jacob in the books! great writing!

[Lizzieice]

Thank you

[Jodie.rawr]

I really like how you've written the characters, there descriptions are spot on :)

I could really imagine the whole thing.

Well written hun :)