lanny987 Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 This story is based on characters and situations owned by the original author and publishers. No copyright infringement is intended or to be infered. ---------------------------------------- Mischievous Hobbits All was calm and quite. The sun shining, birds singing and a gentle breeze blowing through the trees. The surroundings where beautiful. the grass was the greenest you had ever seen. This was the village of Hobbiton, called Bad End. Bag End has a large population of Hobbits, One of which is Frodo Baggins. Frodo went to get his friends, Merry, Pippin and his best friend and personal gardener Samwise Gamgee. He found them all apart from Pippin. “Where is Pippin?†asked Frodo “I don’t know last time I saw Pippin he was going towards farmer Maggots fields.†“Lets go and find him then†said Frodo “Great!†shouted Merry standing up with excitement “No! We nearly got killed last time because of you and Pippin stealing his crops!†shouted Sam “Yeah but we didn’t though did we†said Merry “Come on†said Frodo, “we better find him and make sure he is ok.†They all set off for Farmer Maggots Fields. “Pippin?! Pippin?!†Shouted Merry “Over here!†Shouted a voice. Frodo, Sam and Merry started to walk through Farmer Maggot’s field to where the voice was coming from. The field filled with all types of vegetables the Hobbits couldn’t see over the high growing crops. Sam ran towards the shouting and suddenly slopped he was standing over a big hole where Pippin had fallen in. Merry not looking where he was going walked into Sam knocking him into the hole but on the way down he grabbed Merry so all three had fallen in the hole. Frodo saw what had happened and he just laughed. After laughing for several minutes Frodo started to look for something to get them out of the hole. He couldn’t see anything lying around so he went to Farmer Maggots house. Frodo ran through the fields to Farmer Maggots house as he new that it would be getting dark soon. When he approached the house he noticed a very large tree next to it with a large rope tied to a branch. He climbed up the tree and undid the rope. When he climbed down from the tree Farmer Maggot saw him, Frodo ran as fast as he could back to the others. While Farmer Maggot got his gun. He approached the hole where the others were and threw the rope down to them pulling them up one at a time. Farmer Maggot had let the dogs out and he was shooting his rifle into the air. Pippin helped Frodo pull out Merry and they all ran as fast as they could through all the crops with the dogs closely following. They all climbed over the fence, down the hill and back to the Shire. By Leanne Whitehead Words: 450 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goodmorningjobseekers Posted January 11, 2006 Share Posted January 11, 2006 I think you story is really good, I love The Lord of the Rings! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lanny987 Posted January 11, 2006 Author Share Posted January 11, 2006 Thank you i'm glad you like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orlando_Bloom Posted January 11, 2006 Share Posted January 11, 2006 Cool story I like! I could imagine the characters really well as I read it, its good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
little_miss_naughty Posted January 12, 2006 Share Posted January 12, 2006 I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lanny987 Posted January 12, 2006 Author Share Posted January 12, 2006 Thank you! I'm so glad that people are reading my story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Han Posted January 13, 2006 Share Posted January 13, 2006 As i read your story i can really imagine the characters, they are mischievous. I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lanny987 Posted January 13, 2006 Author Share Posted January 13, 2006 Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bear Posted January 14, 2006 Share Posted January 14, 2006 I like your story its very warm and its probably how all of the hobbits would have behaved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lanny987 Posted January 16, 2006 Author Share Posted January 16, 2006 Thank you! You can imagine them being mischievous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woozle Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 I agree, great story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harry_Potter Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 What a great story, i was thinking of writing my own story but i don't think i would win because there are too many really good stories that people have done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lanny987 Posted January 16, 2006 Author Share Posted January 16, 2006 Thank you. You should go ahead and write a story you'll never win if you don't try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Harry_Potter Posted January 16, 2006 Share Posted January 16, 2006 I'm no good at writing stories i'll leave it to everyone else. make the best story win! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lanny987 Posted January 16, 2006 Author Share Posted January 16, 2006 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reece Posted January 17, 2006 Share Posted January 17, 2006 I like! I could imagine the characters really well as I read it, its good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lanny987 Posted January 17, 2006 Author Share Posted January 17, 2006 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bear Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 Your story is great it's a lot different to mine. I wrote 'Crossing into Shadow' which is about the ringwraiths. They are different in every way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lanny987 Posted January 19, 2006 Author Share Posted January 19, 2006 Thank you! I think your story is great to! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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